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13 Comments

  1. Megha
    July 15, 2013 @ 4:34 pm

    Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

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  2. joyce
    June 25, 2013 @ 5:28 pm

    Fantastic atmospheric story.

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  3. Karen
    June 18, 2013 @ 7:59 pm

    Wonderful story. THANK YOU

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  4. Peggysue
    June 15, 2013 @ 7:02 pm

    Thank you to everyone for the read and comments on this piece. Much appreciated.

    MAF

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  5. M Ralston
    June 3, 2013 @ 6:47 am

    LOVE this piece Margaret! You’ve managed to capture a culture and place, and fill it with believable characters and feeling. Good job!

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  6. Linda
    June 3, 2013 @ 4:49 am

    Great tale of love and loss, a most powerful effect when she smashed the watch, no way to turn back time, brilliant!

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  7. Debashis Deb
    June 2, 2013 @ 2:14 pm

    A wonderful story. Lot of such accidents occur in India and most of them are not reported as they mine illegally. The poor people die and nobody cares. I find the emotions are the same; a poor illiterate indian mother or a mother in developed USA. I found this magazine accidentally. Now on I will read it regularly. I loved the story, specifically the untold emotions and the heart wrenching tale.

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  8. Sue Ellis
    May 29, 2013 @ 7:08 pm

    Short stories don’t get any better than this. The attention to detail, the realism and the convincing personalities make it come to life.

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  9. Lorri
    May 27, 2013 @ 1:30 am

    I love this. My husband’s family is from the mountains of NC, and I attended Appalachian State University. The mountains are full of stories like these–painful, beautiful.

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  10. April Winters
    May 16, 2013 @ 6:09 pm

    Excellent!

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  11. Rose Gardener
    May 14, 2013 @ 9:25 am

    Wonderful writing that carries the story along, seemingly effortlessly. I’m in awe.

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  12. Barbara
    May 13, 2013 @ 2:33 pm

    Very beautifully written. Profound and heart breaking.

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  13. meadowridge
    May 13, 2013 @ 12:34 pm

    What a beautiful story. Every word just right.

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