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  1. anti fatigue mats
    March 13, 2016 @ 8:45 am

    I really enjoyed the characterization and pacing, as well as the disturbing turn of events.

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  2. Ahavah
    August 5, 2013 @ 6:08 pm

    I love this!

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  3. Victoria
    July 10, 2013 @ 9:33 pm

    Fabulous. Great pace and characterization done mostly with dialogue plus a twist at the end – which is what I try to do but have yet to do this successfully. Good job.

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  4. Christopher Walton
    July 8, 2013 @ 2:02 pm

    I’m not much for fantasy these days, but I enjoyed this.

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  5. DKingarts
    June 25, 2013 @ 4:38 am

    The brevity of this story leaves the reader with an uncertain complexity to ponder. Allowing the imagination of the reader to fill in the blanks, works wonderfully for this piece. Well done!

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  6. Lorena Nava Ruggero
    June 17, 2013 @ 5:02 am

    This story was wonderfully unexpected. I really enjoyed the characterization and pacing, as well as the disturbing turn of events.

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  7. nate
    June 15, 2013 @ 6:47 pm

    this was great

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  8. agirlandherthumb.wordpress.com
    May 24, 2013 @ 7:09 pm

    Awesome. My mind was going crazy trying to picture what the boy and his eyes must look like. Not describing it set the right level.

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  9. Karen Walcott
    May 16, 2013 @ 8:42 am

    I really liked this story. It had good characterization and a lot of action and tension/conflict.

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  10. Gregg Chamberlain
    May 14, 2013 @ 4:17 pm

    this seems like the beginning for a series of short fiction pieces, maybe.

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  11. C
    May 14, 2013 @ 12:07 am

    Really wonderful. Kind of a grrrl power story, yes? I think all mothers wish we could be that strong for our dragon children. Thanks for sharing it with us.

    C

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