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9 Comments

  1. Ahavah
    September 7, 2013 @ 11:55 pm

    Love this! The line about his tears and how his face came off really moved me.

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  2. Joey Bondurant
    August 30, 2013 @ 8:48 pm

    incredibly well written!

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  3. LM
    August 27, 2013 @ 8:27 pm

    I needed a good definition of what flash fiction was in order to write one myself. Thank you!

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  4. Carman Curton
    August 8, 2013 @ 1:19 pm

    Thanks for this. Strangely enough, what I enjoyed most was the almost-last line: . . . the sorry state of the world, thankful for our little corner of heaven.

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  5. J.C. Snyder
    August 6, 2013 @ 4:08 pm

    I love this story. I like unexpected endings.

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  6. Nick
    August 2, 2013 @ 3:50 pm

    As always, it’s a treat to read a Kurt Newton story.

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  7. Babs
    August 2, 2013 @ 3:46 pm

    This story has a message. Sadness and hurt are hidden many times but sometimes the love of one will show that it is better to be open. Honesty can increase love and respect for yourself as well as those you love. Loved the story woven in a fantasy.

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  8. Mercedes
    August 2, 2013 @ 3:24 pm

    I enjoyed this very much. It hurts my soul.

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