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  1. 13 Tips for Writing Flash Fiction – Flash Fiction Online
    May 12, 2021 @ 10:54 am

    […] “Beholder” […]

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  2. Lantis
    May 6, 2014 @ 9:31 am

    Beautiful. Thanks for writing.

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  3. John P
    October 20, 2013 @ 7:53 pm

    The tech is believable, in our world of social media and Google Glass. The setting, what we see of it, equally so. And the story… the story itself is beautiful. A lot of flash fiction leaves me unsatisfied, but this story is perfect, the ending just right.

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  4. Flash Fiction Online
    September 9, 2013 @ 1:47 pm

    Welcome Alisha! And best of luck to you!

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  5. Alisha Chhabra
    September 9, 2013 @ 1:45 pm

    tryng to read n interpret…my first step on the threshold of this luxurious domain……appearing for a competition very shortly……..bless me…

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  6. Flash Fiction Online
    September 9, 2013 @ 3:42 am

    My apologies. It should read “The Social Phobic’s Guide to Interior Design”. Either way, swing on over to the site and check it out while you’re reading “Beholder”.

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  7. Sandra Bell Kirchman
    September 3, 2013 @ 8:11 pm

    With the passing of Elmore Leonard last month, the importance of using the exact words to get the idea across has become so important to me. This story, under 1000 words, had me under its spell from the first word to the last. What a shining example of capturing the reader’s heart without drowning him/her!

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  8. Chelsea Cooper
    August 28, 2013 @ 1:39 am

    Wow, really interesting. I love the tech and ideas. Sweet ending.

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  9. Brett Hoppough
    August 6, 2013 @ 2:46 pm

    A very smooth read with a fantastic message. I’m a severely anxious person in public; so, I can relate to this.

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  10. Smedley
    July 9, 2013 @ 5:12 pm

    What a beautiful story.

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  11. Big Joe Cooty
    July 8, 2013 @ 2:29 pm

    Well done again, Sarah Grey. I have read two of your stories and loved them both. I am a Californian who is moving to AZ asap. I am a militant agnostic (I don’t know and you don’t either!) but will eat anything that holds still long enough.

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  12. georgianeighbor
    July 7, 2013 @ 6:29 pm

    I love this story of empathy and love and opportunity.

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  13. Kim Kincher
    June 29, 2013 @ 7:00 pm

    A picture of the pros and cons of our over automated techy, social media based society. Thank you.

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  14. Melinda Bardon
    April 1, 2013 @ 8:05 pm

    Beautifully written.

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  15. mjrafferty
    March 27, 2013 @ 1:34 pm

    Well done! As a writer myself, I really appreciate the mixture of sci-fi an literary. Lots of fun to read and conjure.

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  16. Laura Elizabeth
    March 25, 2013 @ 10:00 am

    Really enjoyed reading this. I could picture it all beautifully in my mind’s eye. The hum of the cloud that follows people around will stick with me all day.

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  17. Michael Robertson
    March 15, 2013 @ 6:16 am

    I love this. In a world full of trolls, compassion can still trump them all.

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  18. Mark Pearce
    March 14, 2013 @ 7:31 pm

    I liked this. Well written and a novel idea.

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  19. Jeff Ellis
    March 14, 2013 @ 4:15 am

    Wonderful story, Sarah. Excellent message with a really masterful word economy. Well done!

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  20. lorriann16
    March 11, 2013 @ 7:23 pm

    I absolutely love this story. I’m a little teary at the end!

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