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22 Comments

  1. MereMorckel
    August 25, 2014 @ 3:05 pm

    Wow – interesting. I’d love to see the a family of seaweed and saltwater!

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  2. Amelia D Keith
    October 28, 2013 @ 11:14 am

    Really enjoyed this one!

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  3. fuse
    August 31, 2013 @ 2:25 pm

    heh heeh heeeeeh hey poopy shut up

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  4. Michael Robertson
    March 15, 2013 @ 6:21 am

    I liked this story. I thought it was well written and realised. The dialogue was sharp.

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  5. Mark Pearce
    March 14, 2013 @ 11:13 am

    Great story and I loved the ending

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  6. invisiblestrength
    March 11, 2013 @ 7:08 pm

    The entire story was unexpected and it hooked me from the start. Loved the ending.

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  7. Linda L. Rigsbee
    March 8, 2013 @ 10:14 pm

    That was really cute. I enjoyed it. Nice writing! Kudos.

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  8. poopy
    March 7, 2013 @ 7:02 pm

    the endings corny

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  9. Barbara Blackcinder
    March 3, 2013 @ 10:39 pm

    Great story.

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  10. Christy Miron
    February 27, 2013 @ 4:16 am

    Excellent!

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  11. Flash Fiction Fan
    February 26, 2013 @ 2:05 am

    Oh, yeah…really, well done! Will keep an eye out for more of your work.

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  12. Carlie
    February 25, 2013 @ 2:19 pm

    Loved this too! (Sorry, just read Sarah’s ‘Beholder’). I particularly admire your dialogue, really nicely done, well done.

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  13. Udicious
    February 24, 2013 @ 6:41 pm

    This is really really good! Great work, man.

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  14. Marduk
    February 22, 2013 @ 7:48 pm

    Creative. I liked it

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  15. yodeane
    February 21, 2013 @ 3:48 am

    I really enjoyed this, the ending was very subtle and very good.

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  16. Annecdotist
    February 20, 2013 @ 3:05 pm

    I enjoyed this, how the dreadfulness is so matter-of-fact, both at the beginning when they don’t want a simple matter of his father overheating to spoil the party, and at the end with the threat of what the boy is to become. Lovely

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  17. Chaque
    February 20, 2013 @ 5:30 am

    Awesome! I love this!

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  18. Michael Aaron
    February 15, 2013 @ 8:12 pm

    Very smart story, keep ’em coming!

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  19. Carolyn Fay
    February 15, 2013 @ 4:01 am

    Loved this. Classic flash twist at the end. I was thinking robot story, but then you turn that on its head with Uncle Steve’s comments about what different people are made of Well done.

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  20. Leximize
    February 14, 2013 @ 5:35 pm

    Rather a ’50s throwback story no? Of how robots might have been envisioned during the “Happy Days” era. Or better yet, kind of a steampunk take on dealing with future mixed mode life types.

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    • Linda L. Rigsbee
      March 8, 2013 @ 10:16 pm

      Interesting. I hadn’t thought of it that way. I was thinking more along the lines of people gradually turning into robots.

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